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    I think this one is beautiful! Well controlled high key with just enough detail to hold the image.

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    Thank you wondered if vignetting a bit much and if the crop a bit tight but wanted the stalk a bit diagonal all thoughts welcome
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    Grahame,

    Greetings. I like the detail of the central part but am not wild about the vignette. Focus isolation has the center without the vignette and for me would suffice.

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    Lovely flower! I like the simplicity of this image, which allows the flower to show it's beauty. I'd like to see a little more room on the left--so the flower has somewhere to look. I'd back off the vignette a bit so it doesn't come onto the flower itself.

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    Lovely flower, Grahame! I like the vignetting and the simplicity of the image. My first thought when I looked at it was that it could use a tighter crop from the bottom and right. I would also lighten the stem a bit. Very nicely done.
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    Grahame, I think it is quite lovely the way it is. I could also see using a light vignette around the outside edges?
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