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Nice preening pose, excellent feather details and great reflection, David. The water with the circular ripples and complimenting color looks good too.
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Hi David,
I really like the preening pose and the reflection.
I would like a bit more room on the RHS.
The processing on this image seems a bit off. I can't say exactly what it is but the area at the top of the head that is against the water looks smudged as does the area around the feathers below the ones in the birds beak.
Maybe I am way off base here and will see what others say. My old eyes...?
Gail
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I don't normally read other critiques before posting my own, but in this case I did, because I saw something "off " around the head but wasn't sure what. Whatever happened, it's worth the time to fix because it's a sweet pose and nice reflection.
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nice image David,but I must agree with Gail's comments.TFS.
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Wonderful shot with a spectacular reflection! I think the slightly odd look on the head might just be some DOF dropoff combined with an area of darker water just behind the head. Should be possible to touch it up -- better in the second shot with cleaner water texture there.
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I think you are right Diane. Thanks for the comment.
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It is a lovely shot and a super pose, given the techs I have slight reservations, I am expecting a little more detail in the plumage - the legs and the bill look spot on but I sense something is missing???
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Awesome shot, nice pose and nice reflection. Agree with Gail in terms of the head. TFS
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Thanks again for the comments.
I do think it is the dof being a little limited. I was pretty close .
Looks like the body is a bit off compared to the head and legs.
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Hi David, with the high speed frame rates of these top end camera's, both your frames look the same with regards to the preening pose.
Great lookback preening pose, and what a lovely clear reflection. I normally go with vertical comps as you have to show off the reflection, but if you didnt shoot this vertically, I would have shown this in landscape so as to include the full circular ripples. Your repost does have a 'cleaner' look around the head.
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David,
Superb image with beautiful reflection.Rest is mentioned above. Re post image looks very nice.
Regards,
Satish.
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Thanks everyone for the comments