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Totally sweet! Beautiful background and especially parent/chick togetherness!
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Lifetime Member
Lovely, intimate moment captured here and great peak of the brood patch. Super feather details, although possibly a tad oversharpened. Not sure how much of a crop this image is as presented, but I just took it into PS and cropped from all sides, esp L & R. The focus of this image is squarely on the intimacy and the amazing feather details of this pair. I don't feel as though this particular environment adds much. I would therefore go tighter if it were mine.
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terrific capture Melissa.
I do prefer the repost.
The feather detail on both is exceptional and the colours all come together to create a beautiful gentle scene.
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Macro and Flora Moderator
I prefer the original by far, very nice detail and excellent exposure. I think the repost is too big in the frame and it is beginning to show noise which is much less apparent. I would suggest a small amount of NR on the subject in the first, in addition to what you applied elsewhere followed by the sharpening regime you applied originally.
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Thanks Jonathan. I was a little worried about the noise showing up in the RP, as I didn't run any NR on the birds at all, not wanting to lose that delicate feather detail.
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Great scene and setting you have here.
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Thanks Marina. I think you found the perfect comp. Appreciate your time and expert eye.
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Beautiful image. love the feathers. Re-crop(s) work well.
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Excellent moment captured. Beautiful poses, colors, details and composition. Re post looks wonderful.
Regards,
Satish.
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HI Melissa,
Blurring of the background is quite obvious as presented and is let down by the halo around the entirety of the youngster's legs and also from the crown right the way round to the ventral area of the adult.
The little patch of sand the bird is standing on also looks odd IMO.
Your work is always of such a high calibre but this image is stands alone as a bit out of the ordinary.
I hope you're not offended by these comments. I mean absolutely no disrespect. I always enjoy and admire your work this presentation is not up to your high standard.
Also I haven't participated on BPN for quite some time so I don't mean to ruffle anyones' feathers.
Kind regards
Chris
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Chris, astute observations like yours are why I keep posting on BPN. Thank you for the critique. I see what you mean, particularly about the sand the adult is standing on. Great catch. I will fix that on my version at home. And thank you for your kind words on my work.
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