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    Taken at Bowdoin Lake, Montana in May. American Avocets mating, touching their cloacae together, as all birds do when mating. It's referred to commonly as the "cloacal kiss"; in a split second, the male's sperm is transferred.

    I like the bit of water in the male's bill. Some people might wish there were a catchlight, but for me, I don't want to add one, as I think that would look unnatural, as there was clearly no sun or single point of light.

    Noise removal, levels, sharpening, and recovered whites in the male's wing.

    Thanks very much for looking, and for any comments and critiques.
    Last edited by Melissa Groo; 09-20-2013 at 04:04 PM.

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    Instant favorite! so much life and beautiful subjects makes for a splendid image. TFS!

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    This is a terrific image, Melissa. You must have been so stoked to witness and photograph this pair. I am in total agreement with you on not adding a catch light. You have some lighter areas in the eyes which you could dodge just a little more if you wanted to bring out more light in their eyes.
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    Outstanding!
    I might sharpen the bottom birds head and beak a tad.
    Excellent image quality...
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    Hi Melissa ,What a great moment in nature . I like the back ground colors matching the Birds .I think the ripples in the water adds as well . TFS.

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    Looks wonderful to me. Especially your angle to the birds. The soft light and killer-sweet BKGR are big pluses. Yes to sharpening her face a bit with a contrast mask.
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    Melissa, just a gorgeous shot with great techs. Talk about being prepared for the right moment! Get his one printed (and send it to me?)

    Really, a wonderful image. I could see the bottom guy getting a bit of head sharpening, but by no means a deal breaker for me.

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    beautiful capture,great light,agree with sharpening the female's head.

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    I love the picture.
    I agree with above advice re: female's head but otherwise a great moment captured.
    The pastel BG is lovely as well and your low POV just rocks,
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    Hi Melissa - Absolutely lovely! Great subject, comp, Bg and IQ. Ditto on sharpening mentioned.
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    beauty! excellent moment captured here. comp, details & exp are superb.
    the female's head needs bit of sharpening as mentioned above.

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    Thanks very much for all the feedback, I really appreciate it. Here is a rework with some additional sharpening on the female's head.

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    Amazing shot, great timing, and techs, Melissa. Composition is perfect.

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    Absolutely stunning shot. Great soft light, wonderful background, great action and wonderful wing pose of the male.

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    The sharpened version makes the superb pic even better. Really like the difference in neck curve, sweet moment and great wing spread.

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    Excellent pose and light, good exposure control, nice comp and good ambient.

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    this is a great shot, well done Melissa
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    Excellent pose and light,nice comp and BG.

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