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Hennie,
I think the colors are terrific in this shot and light is lovely even though you say it was quite harsh.Perhaps the BG gives the illusion of an evening shoot.
I like everything about this shot including IQ, subject,perch and comp.
The only thing that bugs me is that branch that cuts through the body. I would clone that out in a "New York minute" and burn the other whitish vertical OOF branch in front of the bird.
If I was to be really picky I would wish for a slightly better head angle (HA) towards you.
Very nice image.,
Gail
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Hi Hennie - Gail has given a nice in depth critique. I really like the colors. My only additional comment is that perhaps it is slightly oversharpened.
TFS,
Rachel
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Nice image Hennie! I agree with Gail's critique. Composition wise if you have the room I would like to see the full tail, so more room below and to the right.
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Hennie:
An attractive fellow I don't know well. Good points from Gail.
Because the light was bright, I think that the extra contrast processing pushed it a bit too far for my taste, too contrasty.
There are some subtle processing halos along the bill.
Look forward to some more!
Cheers
Randy
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Thank you guys for the advice. Rachel, Randy - I do agree; will learn from it. Jim - No more space, full frame.
Thank yo all for having a look.
Hennie
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Sorry, intended to thank Gail with Randy!
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Super image Hennie, nice colours, details and BG. Agree with Gail's assessment!
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Neat bird, and I am quite OK with the perch. I like the hint of habitat in the BG, but I would tone down the two bright twigs to match the rest of the motif back there. I agree the contrast is a tad strong. Very nice overall.
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I would tone down the contrast a bit, but overall I think it's really well done. The light, the complementary colors and yes, even the sense of habitat. I don't mind the BG at all. I only wish you had been able to get the whole tail in.
How fortunate you got to see and photograph this rarer hornbill!
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What a terrific specimen of a bird i will probably never see. I am OK with the background, it's a very beautiful color. and i like it's dof showing just a hint of the environment. Good comments above.
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