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Well done, Jonathan. Cool subject, nicely sharp. BG complements subject well. I like the comp--well off-center, S-curve. Looks to be a fairly good size slug. Congrats on a cool image and on a wife who will set up a slug shot for you! I think I would have been tempted to try like this and with my pocket diffuser taming the specular highlights.
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Thanks Mitch & Norm, your feedback is much appreciated.
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You make a slug look good! Nice lines, composition, background.
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BPN Member
Hi Jon. This slug gave you a cool pose and your house makes the perfect background! Also good sharpness and comp. As tweaks, you might consider cloning the dried up tip of the flower in the middle of the frame and the little bit of flower peeking into the frame on the left. I like Mitch's idea about using a diffusion screen - it would make an interesting comparison. Maybe your wife could hold it for you.
Overall, this is very well done!
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Hi Jon, I like your treatment of the image and the snail is giving you a good pose. well done. -- Allen
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