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    Default Siberian Stonechat - Female

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    Made with a Canon 450D + Sigma 150-500. Beanbag on car window.
    F6.3 | ISO 200 | SS 1/800 @ 500mm. Av Mode | Eval
    Levels | Crop | USM.

    Comments & critiques most welcome.

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    Girish:

    Lovely soft light, complimentary colors, sharp, well exposed.

    I could see a bit of cropping to show the bird off a bit better. I would consider starting with a crop from the right to just the right of the fork in the main branch, and then a balancing crop from top and left. I would clean up the few tiny leaves left in the lower right corner. I am away from my editing computer, so can't do it, but thought the idea on the crop came through.

    Well captured.

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    Beautiful soft light, detail, and BG color. This is a small nitpick, but I see some halo below her beak and the lower edges of the branch. Extremely well done Girish.

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    The original looks very nice but my immediate reaction was: I should suggest Girish to move the bird up in the frame.
    Then I saw the version of Randy's. I think that cut addresses it all.
    A very pleasing image, Girish.

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    Here is another possibility for you to consider. I like the shape of the cascading branch as it falls off into the lower left corner. (Of course you'd need a bit of cleanup lower right corner.) The poo on the nice green leaves is not too appealing. The background is lovely as is your bird.

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    Beautiful shot, lovely perch and BG, sharp. Grace's crop nailed it for me, showing the nice cascading perch and the bird at the same time. Loi

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    Thanks everybody for your feedback. Will revisit the comp based on the suggestions.

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    Pretty nice perch here with the greenery really adding some nice colours. Too bad there is so much whitewash on it though. Sharp and nicely exposed / processed. My first thought was to crop alternately, so the reposts address that.

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    Hi Girish, I like the overall light in this, and you nailed the DOF to have everything in sharp focus. Good comp suggestions from above, and I too like the perch stretching across the frame.

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