
Originally Posted by
Steve Kaluski
Hi Markus, I like the image and comp, the slight curvature of the body works well and there is enough space for the subject to lookout into. I'm not sure if it needs a sliver more space below or not, but either way it's not a deal breaker for me. Looking at the techs I do feel however 1/80sec is way to low unless you are supported either by tripod or it's rock steady on a bean bag or similar support, even the slightest movement can make all the difference to an image. Overall I do feel the image is a little light, (even looking at the rocks) and applying a Luminosity & Curves adjustment and some more sharpening begins to bring out a bit more richness and texture to the image & subject overall. Depending on your ethics and how you feel, I would remove the dark spot top right, tonally balance out the slightly darker patches on the left and the white streak at the base of the back on the RHS.
TFS
Steve