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    Default Yellow-rumped Warbler

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    Canon 7d, 400mm DO, 1.4x TC II, 580 EX II Speedlite, tripod ................. ISO 400, f10, 1/250s, fill flash ............. from my backyard set up

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    Good looking singing pose and body angle on this one. I like the BG and the unique perch although it looks well used:) Exposure looks good and the feather detail is sharp. Might try to work a different catch in the eye if you are not opposed. Nice work.

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    Allen, excellent feather detail and colors in this shot. Fill flash looks well executed. I like the singing pose and the natural perch. Maybe just a tad more sharpening on the eye?? Let's see what others think.

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    The eye could be cleaned up a bit as David suggested.
    Very cool perch and a nice up close look.
    Dan Kearl

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    Good advice so far. I would clone out 2 of the 3 catchlights keeping the lowest one.
    Singing pose is very nice and perch is unusual but I like it,
    Gail

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    Agree with the others about the eye work. Wonderful pose, details, background and unique perch. Well done.

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    BG colors are wonderful as is the bird and pose. I like the perch, the bird is just a bit large in the frame to me.

    Jack

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    Nice! I like the feather detail and the unusual perch.

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