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    D4 600vr 1/4000s at f7.1 ISO400 -0.7ev.

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    Hi Viv, love the low angle and eye contact. Well exposed, although the whites look a bit 'dull' - is this a juvie? I do like the drinking pose, bubbles and all, and the BG colours look great.

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    Thanks Stu. Not sure on Juvie, looks like a adult to me but not 100 percent sure.
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    Added more brightness, hope it looks better.
    Last edited by Vivaldo Damilano; 07-09-2013 at 01:49 PM.

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    The repost is much better and I think you could add even more brightness.
    The low POV is what makes this shot.
    The IQ is very good and I really like the water drops as he drinks. Cool tan and gun metal gray BG.
    I am glad you included the entire reflection.I like the bubbles but would be tempted to clone out the dark blobs in front of avocet that do not look like bubbles,
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    Wonderful shot.
    The low ange is superb.
    Terrific pose, exposed very well, great detail, and great comp.
    Very well done.

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    Low POV is killer in this one. Nice water and BG. Love the re-post.

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    Repost is much better. Whites look "white" now. :) Very nice.

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    Vivaldo:

    Repost is sig. better, wonderful shooting angle.

    In a perfect world, would prefer the large blue area towards the bottom of the frame have more of the orange tones of the bulk of the water.

    In some ways, painters have it easier, they just tweak it to taste!

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    Repost is very nice.
    I also would clean up the bits that are not bubbles.
    Very nice sheen on the water.
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    Nice repost. Lovely shooting angle & pose.

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    Thanks everyone for comments and suggestions

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    Love the low angle of the lens here and the details on the bird is adding the toppings on the cake,

    the water drop on the beak is too much to have .........Thanks for shearing.

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    very nice,love the low angle,the pose,repost is lighter and better.well done.

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    I like the low angle, reflection, bubbles, IQ and composition. Repost looks better. Excellent image Vivaldo!

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    Very nice pose, colors and reflection!

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    Wonderful image with beautiful low shooting angle and beautiful and colorful BG.
    Love the pose with nice water droplets on beak,colors,nice details,reflection and composition.

    Regards,
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    Love the bubbles and the muted reflection. RP is the better one.

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