That's an interesting line if you start by the top bird's rump and follow along it then to the bottom bird. Too bad you had to contend with some OOF FG stuff as the rest of the setting looks good. I feel that pointing your lens a bit more to the left would have strengthened the comp... assuming there was nothing beyond the frame to creep into the image...
Nice shot.
I really like the interaction and the lighting.
Details look good and love the view of their habitat.
The foreground is a bit distracting.
Well done.
Nicely exposed, and a nice moment captured and myself i done mind the natural habitat comp with a tweak....crop a little more from the right and top. I once took a shot similar to this and added a vignette blur to isolate and bring more attention to the birds from the surroundings,maybe a nice effect on this as well.
can see Daniels point about the nice lines created, very nice.