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    Default American Kestrel - Male

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    Caught this guy last winter at my local wildlife refuge. He flew around me in my truck a few times, then landed close by on these old palm fronds. I like the colors on this adult male.

    1DMKIV---700mm---f6.3---ss1/2500---ISO640---HH@ 8:20am---25% crop

    Thanks as always for looking and for your input. Appreciated

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    beautiful bird! Feather detail looks a bit soft and the oof stuff in loer right could be cleaned up.

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    Nice pose & perfect HA. Lovely colors, as you mentioned.

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    Nice head turn and excellent light, David.

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    Colours, head angle, background, exposure all look great. I agree the details look soft (well focused, just soft as posted).

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    A really gorgeous image, David. The BG colors complement the subject. The side-lighting works well in this instance, with a very nice head angle. I like the perch, though the OOF material in the LR BG does detract a bit.

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    Possible tweaks covered.....fantastic pose and angle. Im OK with FG too.

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    Great look at this beauty. Background is complementary. I think I'd prefer a bit more of a true vertical crop, and could see a bit trimmed from the left.

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    Magnificent image of handsome bird, David.
    I like the colors,pose,lights and nice details.

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    Satish.

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    Default Re-post w/ sharpening

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    Thanks for the comments everyone, appreciated.
    When I looked at this last night I thought it looked good but some of the feathers look soft. As Daniel stated, its focused well just looks soft in spots. I think some of the feathers are soft looking in reality I re-posted with some more sharpening and I cropped as a vertical as suggested by Grace. I thought about a vert but due its tail position thought it would looked cramped up front. What do you think? Thanks in advance.

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    I was going to mention the crop and now saw the repost.
    Fixed it all, nice work on a very nice subject.
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    Light and colors are simply beautiful. The repost addressed the sharpness issue for me. I might have been tempted to leave some or all of the OP room up front, and add a little canvas on top to make it more vertical.

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    Beautiful capture! Wonderful to get so close to one of these guys! I always have trouble deciding how to crop an image with this composition. I guess it's often 50-50, but I do like the re-post.

    I couldn't complain about sharpness here, but for my images, there is a Murphy's Law Corollary that says the eyes are never as sharp as they should be, even when details both in front and behind are sharp. Not saying I see that here, just commiserating about what can look like variable sharpness.

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    David, a gorgeous looking bird in good light and BG. Not sure where your focus point was, but you must be very close to him, thus I wonder if DOF may be the reason for some softness in the feathers. But overall looks good me, the eye looks sharp and there is a catch light. The RP is a bit tight to me. Would love to see the full frame version. Loi

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    Love the re-post. BG is just great.

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    I am with Bill here on the crop suggestion. the repost has too little room in the front of the bird, IMO.

    Loved this shot...the eye level shooting angle, light and colors...terrific.

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    What a wonderful close-up shot.
    Lovely light and head turn.
    I would keep the OP and add more canvas up top. The repost is too tight for my taste,
    gail

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    Thanks everyone for the input and help. Greatly appreciated.
    I compose this shot the way I did because of the pose he was in. I also thought the vertical was too tight in the front.
    I like the idea of adding to the top though.
    Loi, I think you're right, I was pretty darn close to this guy and only had a second or two to snap of a couple shots.
    Due to being that close there is very little depth of field.
    Thanks again.

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    Gorgeous photo of a beautiful bird. Love it.

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    Hi David, super pose and HA, and I do like the colours on him. Comp wise, Im not sure if you have any more space below, but I would still the vertical route, but not so tight on the left as in your repost, and add a bit to the bottom.

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    Terrific shot.
    Great pose, wonderful background and light.
    I personally like the OP best the repost is to tight for my liking.
    Well done.

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    Thanks everyone for the comments and suggestions, appreciated.

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