Like the composition and the pose a lot. Here's a repost based on some of the above feedback. SH/H to bring out the underwing detail, toned down the hot spot on the neck, slight saturation boost to the bird. How do you like it?
Nice action and great sharpness on the head area. Overall I would prefer it to be lighter, but the time of day may have been against you, hence the hard light on the neck area(?)