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    Sanjeev,

    Consider a different crop with less peach, it pulls the eye off the subject. I really like this one and was curious if more mid-tones (pop) would give the subject a stronger look. There are sever options here as you know: levels, curves, selective color (gray & black) to add more vibrance and saturation to this beautiful bird.

    The subject is framed well and has a clean well lit eye. The opportunities for improvement are in the bottom right hand corner. Always walk your eye around the frame (all 4 corners) and ensure things are balanced - thanks for posting - this is a good one.
    Last edited by Jeff Cashdollar; 05-08-2013 at 09:59 PM.

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    Gorgeous capture! The perch is more detailed than the bird, so does compete. I'd think about taking a little off the bottom and maybe reducing contrast on it and increasing it (or sharpness, or Structure) on the beautiful bird.

    If it were mine (which I wish it was!), I'd also want to get rid of the OOF light branch in the lower left.

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