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Dennis, I like everything about the bird . . . in fact, about the entire image . . . by the way, i'm not sure if it is looking at me or at the vertical branch it seems to be shying away from (better than at the branch from which it is shying) (?).
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I like the idea of a vertical branch to anchor the composition but I think it would work better if there was more separation between the cardinal and the branch and if the branch was a bit thinner
techs: The critical focus appears to be on the wing area leaving the head a bit soft. BG and colors are good
TFS
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Exposure, colors and BG look good. Agree the perch would work if it were farther away from the bird. Focus is off as noted. Your best bet is to focus on a bird/subject's eye, and then recompose. That way you know your eye is always going to be sharp.
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Arash and Marina echo my thoughts. Great looking female cardinal though, nice BG, and the perch has nice weathering to it. For web presentation some more sharpening to the face would likely work.
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Dennis:
I have taken the privilege to modified the image and hope you don't mind.Here is the image,where I have removed the vertical branch which is competing with cardinal and sharpened slightly.

Regards,
Satish.
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