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    Default Bohemian Waxwing #2

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    F 600mm II and 1.4X
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    Almost full frame and cloned branch in RUC
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    Beautiful image. I like the BG & the diagonal branch with the partially eaten berries with the bird looking at them that tell a story. Great techs. Have you considered cleaning up the beak? I might also prefer more room on the left. But, all personal preference.
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    Love the pose on this one Gail. Just beautiful.

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    Great pose, looks like he is contemplating which one to finish off. Great detail in the feather and a full set of waxy tips. Wont be long before they leave our shores, hope they return to the UK next year.

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    Very beautiful image of the bird colour and exposure is spot on well done Gail! That little bird is so adorable...

    I have been hunting them locally but with no luck yet though many reported there are still 10-20 flocks around so fingers crossed I will get some coming weekend.

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    How painterly is that! The BG is soooo complementary to the waxwing. Exposure and details are all there. Great job. If you have wall space, print it.

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    Gorgeous shot, Gail. I love the glow from the eaten berries, as with your earlier post. Great bg, pose, silky texture. My only hesitation is that the bird seems a little centered, but taking out the berry on the right and giving more space to the left would probably look unbalanced.

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    Excellent shot.
    Superb pose, excellent details, really like the perch, and very nice background.
    WEll done.

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    Thank you all for your helpful comments.
    I cleaned up the bill and added 5% canvas on the LHS using content aware fill. I think this looks good.

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    A perfect crop, a complimentary BG, and no two crabapples are the same. Fine job.

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    What light! Obviously the B.W. is a stunner, but it's the fruit and complimentary background that elevate this photograph...

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    Hi Gail. Lovely even light! The pose, sharpness, fruits, comp, and background all come together to make an excellent image! You might consider selecting the pupil and darkening it - the eye has sort of a glazed over look because of the lighter area on the pupil. This would be a simple tweak that would put this image over the top!

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    RP is better and I love the IQ on this one, and the colors go so well together. The bird's pose is also a peaceful one...maybe contemplative.
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    Let's hope 3 times a charm.
    I darkened the pupil as per Steve's suggestion.
    Thanks for the comments and help.
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    Gail, A wonderful image, worth all these tweaks! Here's my 2 cents. No way would I clean up the bill....the berry has been picked at - tidbits left on his bill are to be expected and I did not find them offensive or distracting. I think you've gone overboard with the eye, it doesn't look appropriate or natural for the light that you were working with. i would remove the berry stem that is sticking him in the butt. :) This being said, how I wish this one was in my files!

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    #14 is better in my opinion. Very nice image. TFS.

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    I agree with Troy. I think #14 is the best.
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    Excellent details, love the perch, great pose, very nice background, and nice light..

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    Great image in my book.

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    Every thing has been said about this absolutely superb image with wonderful color scheme.
    Love the composition in re post,pose,colors and lovely details.

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    I also prefer #14. Such a nice image

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    Gail, this does not look like a photograph. TO me its like a Oil Paint that you have labored over for days together.
    The BG, the crispness of the image and specially the eaten berry.......The image is mesmerizing....image #14 works for me..

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    Beautiful capture! I like the pose! Head angle is just perfect to show the Waxwing having some interest in the berries.

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    Excellent image Gail! I like the pose, sharpness, berries, complimentary BG and composition. I agree with the Grace's critique.

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    Killer background, the subject melts into it. I really like it.

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    Great Job Gail, the "Classic" Waxwing capture , it works for me all elements have come together nicely!! Oh BTW nice avatar photo!!

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    Hi Gail, love the soft light, and how the waxwing is peering at the picked berry. What a fantastic BG, it compliments the waxwing so well. Im fine with the 'dirty' bill in your OP.

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