Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: Green Hermit

  1. #1
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Location
    Rancho Santa Fe, CA
    Posts
    133
    Threads
    41
    Thank You Posts

    Default Green Hermit

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    This has become my favorite Costa Rican hummingbird because of its acrobatic flight behavior and graceful poses. Photographed last month in Costa Rican cloud forest on workshop with Greg Basco and Doug Brown. Sugar water was injected into the flower and the bird was lit via multi-flash. I desaturated and darkened the flower a bit to reduce competition with the bird.

    1D IV, 150mm, 1/200", f/18, ISO 320, tripod

  2. #2
    Super Moderator arash_hazeghi's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    San Francisco, California, United States
    Posts
    18,545
    Threads
    1,318
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    nice pose and setting. The colors look a bit over-saturated and overall a bit too contrasty here. The red channel is blown which can happen with flash too easy. lowering exp. and cooling the image will help recover it

    Name:  Green-Hermit---Female-1.jpg
Views: 87
Size:  214.8 KB
    New! Sony Capture One Pro Guide 2022
    https://arihazeghiphotography.com/Gu.../Sony_C1P.html


    ------------------------------------------------
    Visit my blog
    http://www.arihazeghiphotography.com/blog

  3. #3
    BPN Member Bill Dix's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Location
    Princeton, NJ
    Posts
    12,487
    Threads
    1,892
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Striking hummer, and even more striking flower. Although you desaturated it, I think some further desaturation, along the lines reposted by Arash, help the image.

  4. #4
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Costa Rica
    Posts
    966
    Threads
    41
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Bill, good to see this one here. This is always a tough flower for a setup in terms of holding the red. I generally would work that color or area in post. I remember this setup, and I know we were going for some drama, but it looks a little contrasty as presented above. If you wanted to send me the RAW file (www.wetransfer.com), I'd be happy to take a look at it and give you my take. I'm sure Doug would as well.

    Cheers,
    Greg

  5. #5
    Super Moderator Daniel Cadieux's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Ottawa, Canada
    Posts
    26,266
    Threads
    3,976
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Wicked pose and setup!! Some additional processing TLC as per the previous critiquers would bring this up some notches.

  6. #6
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Location
    Rancho Santa Fe, CA
    Posts
    133
    Threads
    41
    Thank You Posts

    Default Redo

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    I've come to the conclusion that I am a slow learner with respect to saturation and contrast. I went back to Lightroom and reprocessed this image from the ground up, paying particular attention to toning down the reds and yellows on the flower. Have I gone far enough? Thanks very much for the constructive criticism.

  7. #7
    Lifetime Member gail bisson's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2011
    Location
    Nova Scotia
    Posts
    12,731
    Threads
    910
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Hi Bill, The repost is excellent. Addresses the saturation and contrast issues.
    Love the long curved beak and cocked tail.
    I am wishing the ends of the leaves were visible on the bottom of the frame,
    Gail

  8. #8
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Costa Rica
    Posts
    966
    Threads
    41
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Bill, this looks worlds better. I think it was well worth the time to go back and re-process. Congrats on a great image!

    Cheers,
    Greg

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics