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    Hi Folks,

    Curve-billed Thrasher on top of Night Blooming Cereus putting in his sentry watch

    Gus

    Olympus E-510, Zuiko 140-600 equiv.
    Aperture Priority F/6.3 1/1250s
    ISO 200
    EV-0.7
    Focal length 340 mm

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    love this compsition, gus!! looks great. the head angle isnt ideal, but it works for me in this instance. giving the far away look!! this may be a little oversharpened? i see noise in the blue bg. the light in the eye is fantastic!!

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    Gus
    Interesting positioning of the light, coming in from over your right shoulder, I think. For me, it gives defining shadows on the Cereus, and (luckily) the major parts of the bird are also lit. Well done, it is a striking image.

    Gail Spitler
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    Agree with suggestions and can add wish for a slight lower angle.

    Gail is correct in that shadows define ..... but you need to balance the flash to avoid the dark are without light. I think that area detracts Alternative is the frontal lighting.

    PS wise would select the blue sky then reverse and feather Will keep all halos away!!! See some on the back side of the bird

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    Gus Cobos
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    Very nice composition Gus,
    I agree with reducing the noise in the background and I would have liked to have seen your subject looking at you...:D

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    Oscar Zangroniz
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    Gus, great colors and composition. I do agree on the noise in the bg.
    A very nice capture and a striking pose.
    Congrats,

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    Hi Folks,

    Thanks for looking at my photo, and offering your kind critiques. I think you are all spot on, and if I can remember your suggestions (At 84 my recall in on delayed) my next photo under similar situations will be an improvement.

    Al, thanks for tip on the halo going the length of the back.

    Gus :)
    Last edited by Gus Hallgren; 05-01-2008 at 12:39 AM. Reason: Forgot something

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    Gus on most images involving a clear even sky just about any work will cause a halo Fortunately it is very easy to select then inverse and feather. One other consideration for halos is Noise Ninja or similar product.

    They usually have sharpening applied at the same time noise is reduced. The noise reduction step will be detrimental to the sharpness so why not increase it a bit? Halo With clear sky images will happen every time. In NoiseNinja you can turn the sharpening off. I'm sure others work the same

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    Al: Thank you, using Noiseware Pro and your suggestions it looks improved . . .

    Gus

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