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Richard:
The colors here are very nice, like the environmental colors complimenting the bird.
Because of the large bush in the left foreground, I would be tempted to crop this as a vertical, to reduce the bushes impact. I am fine with most the grasses, but wish the closest one to his face wasn't there, it rather acts as a stop the movement of my eye around the frame.
The face looks a little soft and the crown looks a bit odd, as if there were some masking issues?
Cheers
Randy
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I love the environment here. colors are nice. I agree with Randy about the bush on the left, if it was in focus it would work fine. I too see the softness on the top of the head.
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Excellent painterly sorrounding and nice looking back pose, Richard.
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The comp is much better in the re-post and the head looks sharper. Looks like a painting in a hunting lodge now. Obviously the effect has over saturated the colors but thats the effect. Cool.
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Thanks David - yes , Hunting Lodge painting indeed!
thx
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Hi Rich I like the shot and the composition of the repost especially, I think however the Topaz is a little OTT. Not exactly sure where we are going with colour, there appears to be a red cast (maybe just a little too warm)
I find the Topaz detail needs to be used very sparingly for birds,otherwise the image goes crunchy. I use it on the full sized image around the minimal setting for fine detail and more often than not that is all I use, I often set the boost to negative (1-2), especially if I do end up using the medium and large detail sliders.
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Hi Jon
I like to experiment lol
I applie the soft option in detail and quite liked it, actually I have pretty much stopped using TD
its nice to get these different perspectives of course :-)