Hi Dave. Nice pose, plus good sharpness and background. The head looks a bit bright to me - you might try darkening it by about 1/3 stop to see if you like that better. Overall, this is very nicely done and a minor tweak will take it up a notch!
Hi Dave, I really like the detail around the head and bill, together with the colours. I felt your OP was fine with regards to tonality, but would change the comp to suit only a portion of the neck and head, and that the head falls at least into the first half of the frame.