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    Default Grey Heron with Breakfast

    We were watching the Greater Flamingoes from the boat when this guy got active and fished, i couldn't get the image when it speared the fish but got this one after the fish was out of the water
    ISO 800, f 7.1 , 1/5000
    from a boat with a monopod
    5D MIII + 400 2.8 + 2x tc

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    The area of the wing behind the neck has some noise in it since i raised it out of the dark, just preferred the wing design rather than black area, There were 2 blobs of egrets in the right hand top corner on the edge of the water that i have cloned out here.

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    Hi Vishal.
    I like the light and the nice low POV and the wing position of far wing. I do wish for a better position for the near wing.
    The fish is even facing the correct way!
    I would rotate the image CCW a few degrees.
    Nice BG and good PP,
    Gail

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    Well done for some pretty bright light and 800 mm as well. Lining up the ripples from left to right looks like some ccw rotation for sure. I might also try to add some selective black to the bird as well to accentuate the blues and greys a bit more. It may also darken the water a bit.

    Lovely bg and shooting angle. I also like the position of the bird in the frame.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave Leroy View Post
    Well done for some pretty bright light and 800 mm as well. Lining up the ripples from left to right looks like some ccw rotation for sure. I might also try to add some selective black to the bird as well to accentuate the blues and greys a bit more. It may also darken the water a bit.

    Lovely bg and shooting angle. I also like the position of the bird in the frame.
    Thanks Dave and Gail, based on the feedback i have tried to redo the image , shifting the rotation and the few other small tweaks , Let me know if this is ok
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    Last edited by vishaljadhav; 03-02-2013 at 11:35 AM.

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    Repost is excellent!
    gail

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    Good comments above and repost looks super.
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    Hi Vishal, great low perspective, and its always great to see the subject with a catch. Well done on the repost addressing the rotation. Comp wise, if this were mine, I would take a bit off the bottom, and add to the top.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stuart Bowie View Post
    Hi Vishal, great low perspective, and its always great to see the subject with a catch. Well done on the repost addressing the rotation. Comp wise, if this were mine, I would take a bit off the bottom, and add to the top.
    Stuart thanks, I to wished to have more at the top however the C C W rotation ate into it

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    Excellent image with very nice exposure and colorscheme.

    Regards,
    Satish.

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    Very nice scene and colors.

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