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    Waiting here in the west of Germany for the spring.

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    Frank:

    I like the pose with grass on the bill, overall exposure and sharpness. I might try to soften the dark brown areas at the top of the frame.

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    Oh, yes, I removed them now.

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    HI Frank, Love that you were working right down sun angle. And I like the feeding pose with the diagonal lines. I'd take about half off the bottom as there is more room below the bird than above the bird. You might try a crop at the point where the foreground grass starts to go out of focus.
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    The repost improved the composition. The goose looks very nice. I like the foraging.
    The surroundings are so contrasting in lightness and darkness, that it's difficult for me
    not to find it distracting....but again, less so with the repost.

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    Frank, nice shot. the thumbnail does not do justice. agree with Artie on some crop from bottom. I liked the grass-snow mix on the ground. Very nice pose as well.

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    I thank you.

    Here is a another crop.

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    Frank:
    Beautiful image of goose.Very environment with snow and grass.
    Love the feeding pose,nice colors,details andlights and composition in repost.

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    Pane #7 is better but still too much oof grass. A crop from just below the Naturfottograffe line.... The oof-grass grabs the eye....
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    Pane #7 is better but still too much oof grass. A crop from just below the Naturfottograffe line.... The oof-grass grabs the eye....
    Thanks for your tips, Arthur.

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