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    excellent pose, details and sharpness, it's a bit too big in the frame for me

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    Frank:

    I concur with Arash on all points. Background is also very nice. In a perfect world would prefer not to have the end of the perch broken off.

    I might soften the darkest black blob inside the darker area in RUC. Probably natural, just catches ones eye as you peruse the nice background.

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    Beautiful capture Frank, excellent detail and exposure. To be really critical I would consider three things, the long yellow wing bar is just a tad bright - not burnt out but I think you could improve the detail slightly. The other thing I would consider is to reduce the crop or add a little canvas. Thirdly the perch is OK - but I bet you could easily find a better one at this time of year with some mosses or lichen on it.

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    Simple and very very sweet image.
    Lose the pose,colors,details,smooth BG and composition.

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    the colors work so well together here. nice light, pose, and detail.

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    beautiful bird, excellent pose and background, Frank. The perch could be nicer but I guess that's what he landed on.

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    I like th eight, pose, and details. If you could add more room around it would make it even better in my opinion.

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    Hi Frank, the IQ, light and finer details are all superb, not to mention the perfect sharpness. Adding more space, left, top and right will put this up a few notches.

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    Very nice shot.
    Excellent pose and details.
    Wonderful background and very nice soft light.
    Well done.

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    Lovely image, Frank, with super details, exposure, sharpness. Love that BG and the HA.
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    exposed very well and lots of detail in the bird. Very nice.

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    excellent detail and exposure. Love that BG and the HA.

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