Gary, I love your concept. To my taste, the bird is quite large in the frame, too centered, and the feathers look crunchy and too rough. Is this a big crop? If so, I personally would try a looser composition.
I really like the head angle, and "heavenly" appearance. I would second Grace's suggestion for a looser crop. I tried to capture one of these guys a few weeks ago, but couldn't get anywhere close.
Lovely subject and love seeing it in snow. Nice that you can see the one "horn." I agree the feathers look crunch, probably from oversharpening. Is this a large crop? While I like the portrait look, I think you could give it a looser crop and it would be even more appealing and less destructive to the image.
Last edited by Marina Scarr; 02-07-2013 at 10:23 AM.
I agree with the suggestions and remarks above, and would also clean up the glassy "marbled" look to the eye. I too like the concept and feel that a bit more tweaking can bring this up a level or two.