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In too like the curve of the branch, verging on a cut off heart shape with the branch on the left as well, angle is a bit steep but nice light and detail and do like the bird being framed by the branches and the oof leaves
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I like the perch and the way it frames the bird. I think some of the BG is a little bright and distracting. I am thinking a tighter crop and toning down the BG may improve this. Cool little bird!
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I actually like the loose composition and inclusion of leaves. I do wish the shooting angle wasn't quite so steep, and I'd try to bring down the white patch on the wing a little.
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Agree with your self assessment here on the tail, and just love that branch. Really like the loose comp you chose here and the artistic feel to the image. I think you made lemonade.
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Hi,
I like the overall feel of the picture, and the greens make me feel as if I'm in a dreamy Summer woodland (it's -25C with blowing snow here today, so I really like this!). But I too would wish for a less steep angle on the bird.
Richard
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Melissa, very nice. I really like the way the branches frame the warbler , but I agree that it would be better if the tail was separated theo the branch.
Colin
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Melissa, lovely image, like the perch and the head turned towords you. BG is really nice too. Wish the angle to be less steep though.
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I really like how this bird is framed with the leaves and the almost heart shape created by the branches. Agreed about the tail, darn. I like the pose and your choice of composition.