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Hi Gerald. Really like this photo and composition and the exposure looks spot on from my un trained eye. I don't consider myself good enough to suggest a comment but I find my eye drawn to the dark horizon in the left hand corner. Maybe this could be toned down, but as I said, I really like it.
thanks
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I'm a huge White Pelican fan and I like this image...ruffled in flight...but I would have removed the land in the bg because it doesn't really look like "land", such as trees, etc. Great detail on the bird itself.
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Gerald:
Handsome fellow, sharp, well exposed.
Generally I do like something in the bg in water shots, or sky for that matter, as it gives some sense of depth. Here however, the spit isn't much to write home about, and unfort. it is right on line with the bill, so I would be tempted to eliminate it, or perhaps move it up or down a bit.
Cheers
Randy
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Nice details in your whites and nice and sharp. Like the blue BG but which the line weren't at the bird's beak.
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Wonderful shot!!
I really like the flight pose, exposed very well, terrific comp, nice IQ, and very nice light.
Agree on removing the piece of land.
Well done.
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I prefer the OP, but I agree with removing the line. There is enough texture on the bottom part of the BG to let us know it is water anyhow IMO. Good job on the pelican, he's looking very good.
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Hey Gerald,
Pelican looks great.....although not my favorite wing position. If you go with the OP......agree with everyone above and lose the land strip. I do like your repost pano with the land as well......so two very nice images out of one!
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