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    Default Purple Moorhen - Walk in the Park!!

    A purple moorhen walks nonchalantly across the green plains at Mangalajodi, India. The place is a haven for winter birds that migrate to India.


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    Last edited by Peter Kes; 01-08-2013 at 01:39 PM.

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    Nice light, nice pose and lovely sense of habitat.
    I like your concept with all the negative space. I'd move the bird a bit further up into the frame.

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    I wish there was more light on the bird. I would move the bird up in the frame to give more space for the legs.
    I would also crop a bit tighter.
    Nice low POV and I like the environment the bird is in,
    Gail

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    I like the image alot, except I'd add back a little bit of canvas left and below (not much more needed but I think the subject is a little too tight to the corner). Perfect HA, especially with the light angle you had.

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    Lovely soft light. Beautiful bird. I'm in agreement with Dan in regards to his suggestions for tweaking
    the comp. I love the loose spacious presentation.

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    Thanks guys, will keep the suggestion in mind Dan for the future presentations. Thanks everyone for the support.

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    Supreet:
    Beautiful image.Little more crop as suggested above.
    Love the pose,colors,nice feel of environment and low angle.

    Regards,
    Satish.

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