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    Stormy morning overcast - basically no light
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    Great image Jeff. There are a couple of leaves at the top that tend to draw my attention and I might try to darken the leaves at the bottom just a little but that might just be me.

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    David,

    I appreciate the input and every opinion is important to me. I am trying to include more habitat in my pics and thought the leaves framed the subject. But to your point, including elements in the foreground can be subject - thanks for reviewing my work.

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    Jeff, the image is beautiful, and I love the berry in the bird's beak. I wondered why you decided to include so much to the left of the bird, as opposed to cropping some of it out. Was it to ensure a more interesting, "off-center" composition?

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    Wendy,

    Great question IMO among the most challenging things a photography does is decide on subject placement. In this situation I used the grids and applied the rule of thirds (pushed it a bit as you noticed) plus wanted plenty of room for the bird to look into; also do not like images that are too tight. It is a bit subject and every photographer must find balance, it would be alright to cut a bit off as well. The fact that the background complimented the subject helped too; the rule of thirds is a composition method that helps the eye find balance in the frame.
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    Very good subject and composition. Tough lighting. The image looks soft on my monitor, and looks like too much NR, though I can't be sure. Was the image underexposed? regards~Bill.

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    Hi Jeff, I love these birds and nice to see that you got such a good opportunity to capture one. Nice use of the fill flash in these conditions! I like the exposure, color, and detail. Super background too. Excellent example of behavior adding interest!
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    Toughest of lighting conditions I say. But you made the best of it, great use of fill flash to ensure even lighting here. I also really like the HA, and how you got that berry in perfect position. The photo itself - although the bird has room to look into - may be a slight bit off-balance because on one side there is beautiful creamy negative space, and the other side there is the bird and its habitat. IMO, for a simple perch this composition works better, but as the perch is so busy in this case it makes the image look a little off balance. Could be just me though!!

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    Great catch. Waxwings are naturally very soft so that is not a concern as long parts of him which should be sharp are sharp imho.

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    Bobo,..

    Great comments and you are correct the waxwings are naturally soft and do not not easily show detail!
    I shot wide open - that tends to me my style and the light was very low,...

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    Nice shot Jeff, apart from the out of focus leaves I would have gone for a tad more sharpening around the head and beak area and a slightly smaller crop.

    Always enjoy looking at pictures of Waxwings.

    Richatd

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