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I like the reflection. I would probably crop some of the bottom and right side of the image, although in some ways it works well enough as it is; reflections add an interesting variable to the composition equation. The lighting angle on him seems to be a little bit too much from the rear. I also might clone the rubbish off the surface of the water, and, using a mask, selectively increase the contrast of the water.
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Sanjeev,
I agree with Chris's comments especially the bottom of the frame, too much space and the subject is too centered. The opportunity here is subject placement, clean up water and add more punch maybe leveraging a filter giving it more value in the frame. In this pic the subject is interesting but the water is a large part too, might play with it using NIK or photo filters - look for opportunities to make the picture stand out! Look beyond bird in the water, tell us a story,..its beauty, the season, the habitat!
Keep em coming and nice job with the 500, was this HH?
Last edited by Jeff Cashdollar; 12-28-2012 at 01:44 PM.
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I agree with Chris and Jeff about cropping and cleaning up the water. I like the low angle and the general pattern on the water. Nice job on the exposure, you've got detail on the neck and kept the whites. Coots are tough!
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Thanks for the RP Marina, you sure have taken this up one level. Thanks for the tip reg cleaner water. Will keep that n mind when I am in the field next time.