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    ISO 800, f 7.1, 1\60, 90mm
    Last edited by Pat Nighswander; 04-28-2008 at 07:38 AM.

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    Color and sharpness is good. The BG white spots make it a little too busy, and the bloom in the upper right is distracting.
    Really like the yellow and white details.

    Robert

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    It should go a little tighter in my opinion, a lot of distracting elements otherwise.
    Lovely colors!

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    The colour impact of this vivid blue iris catches the viewer's attention Pat. Agree with Robert about the portion of iris on the top right being distracting - cropping (or cloning) this out would improve composition.

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    Have to agree with the other comments. The color and detail of the irises are outstanding but the background is too busy. Believe me I know. I am the king of busy backgrounds! ;)

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    Hey Pat, agreed on past posters comments on the BG being to busy and agrre on crop the flower on the right side.

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    Thanks for the feedback guys. I appreciate your help and comments.. only replying now as I have been off on a wildfllower birding adventure for the weekend.. I cropped the right and cloned out a bit of the bg.

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