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Avian Moderator
Grace:
I think the "Outside the lines" phrase may become our newest category! I am liking what is showing up.
The water patterns are great, and the colors go so well with the widgeon. I would agree about a crop from the top, but more modest than usual for this pose, because the water patterns add a lot.
Traditionally I would say, crop out the wavy reflection. AS an alternative, I would say, perhaps very gently tone it down, so it remains as a viewable detail, but doesn't immediately drag our eye to the white bill.
The whites on the flank look a bit hot on my work monitor, but it reads a bit hot despite calibration, so grain of salt there.
Appreciate you jumping in and crossing a few of those lines!
Cheers
Randy
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Hi Grace, the wigeon and water are most pleasing. You have a nifty donut-style reflection, and as far as wavy reflections go, a donut won't ruin anyone's day. Regarding pictures like these, which many of us are addicted to taking, the water is always as important as the duck. In that department I agree with you wholeheartedly. Overall: I'm not crazy about the donut reflection but after playing the "use-the-sidebar-to-crop-Grace's-picture" game for a short while (which I think you told me about in the first place) I vote thusly: keep the reflection in! I would, however, crop a slab off the top.
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Beautiful duck, magical water, light quality is excellent, details are perfectly sharp.
The image could benefit from some clockwise rotation. Agree with your thought
regarding trimming from the top.
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The duck is sharp, look well expose to me, with fine details and good pose. I agree that the pattern in the water is very beautiful. Since you have pretty water here, instead of cropping off the top maybe more room at left, right and bottom.
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Thanks, everyone, interesting suggestions!
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Hi Grace, I am not bothered by the reflection. I too would take a bit more off the top. Beautiful image and beautiful bird...good exposure and sharpness.
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Lifetime Member
Hi Grace,
The water colors are beautiful-copper, green, gold and browns= beautiful.
I like it as is but wish you had been lower because the reflection doesn't really add to the shot.
Exposure, IQ all excellent.
I know your reflection lines up perfectly and that the duck is angled slightly towards you but I feel you should do a bit of CW rotation to fool the eye,
Gail
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Super Moderator
cool shot, a crop from the top will be helpful.
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Super Moderator
I like the wacky warped reflection! The water is superb. I too agree with a crop from above...
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Yet another vote for a crop from the top, would love to see this in a repost. That water is so funky and beautiful, and there is a lot to take in, between the textures in the water and the details in the bird's plumage. A really pleasing image.
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Forum Participant
Thats a neat rendition of the Widgeon Grace, and i love the patterns & colours and the crazy reflection in the water - lovely sharp image , good exposure. Composition would be improved IMO with a crop from the top. Well seen and taken.
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Yes! I think this is more engaging, Grace. Nice job.
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Hi Grace. I like the reflection and was going to suggest some off the top and it does look better. Do you have just the slightest bit left from the bottom? I am feeling the need for it as I think the reflection is too close to the edge...I keep going back to it. I really like the water colors ,patterns and the detail on the duck.
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Cheryl, yes, I do, but the reflection was repeating again. I could do a little creative ps work and add. Good point.
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Forum Participant
Beautiful image Grace,nice light,sharp,great colors and pattern in the water magic.well done.
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