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Hi,
I like the overall comp., the sharpness of the bird, the eye, and the reflection with its symmetry. Water color is very pleasing. But I find it a bit hard o work out just what part of the bird is doing what, and where the foot is.
Richard
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BPN Member
Nice behavior. A tighter crop for me and another round of sharpening on the bird.,
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Lifetime Member
Interesting behavior. Agree on a tighter crop would definitely showcase your subject and behavior more.
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Super Moderator
I like the pose, colours, the many ripples, and the reflection. If the IQ can withstand it I would definitely crop it tighter. The brightest whites on the head could be toned down too.
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Looks like a crop is in order . . . thanks to all of you . . . I'm going out today to see if I can do better . . .