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This is very nice in B&W, and the lily pads are arranged in wonderful curves. I like it just the way it is, but I wonder how it would look if it were cropped a bit from the bottom so the reverse S-curve that starts at the upper left corner would end at the lower right one.
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Hi, Dennis, thanks for the comment. I agree about the crop. I tried it that way first but was attached to the lily pad at the bottom left because of the dark/light pattern so I left it there. I could like it either way

Originally Posted by
Dennis Bishop
This is very nice in B&W, and the lily pads are arranged in wonderful curves. I like it just the way it is, but I wonder how it would look if it were cropped a bit from the bottom so the reverse S-curve that starts at the upper left corner would end at the lower right one.
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Cheryl Slechta
Hi, Dennis, thanks for the comment. I agree about the crop. I tried it that way first but was attached to the lily pad at the bottom left because of the dark/light pattern so I left it there. I could like it either way

I share your feeling about that lily pad. When looking at the image, yesterday, I assumed that several of the lily pads, including that one, were a bit beyond their prime. I wasn't sure how they'd affect a color image, but they're an enhancement in B&W.
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Cheryl, This is very cool. I like the idea of a healthy crop from the bottom too. Or if you are not opposed to adding a few pads in the LRC.
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Beautiful b&w composition, Cheryl. I like the effect on the leaves and that patch of reflected light... nicely processed!
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Cheryl, I can see the crop, but I like it as is, the texture and multiple tones of the bottom left pad repeat nicely through the image. Well seen!
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It looks like a hb pencil sketch, very nice work and effects, nice framing..
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This turned out very well! The B&W conversion works. Lots of lights and darks, textures, lines to look at. The composition is excellent. I don't mind the bare area at the bottom right. It seems to me to create a line going up and around/through the image.
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