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    Default Daffodil Stamen

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    Trying to look at the inside of flowers differently.
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    The idea is good, I like the shapes, colors and textures. the image is a little too tight in the frame for me, also cropping from the left would be good, the OOF areas in an image can be distracting.

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    I also like the ideal but this image seems a little sterile to me with the stamen dead center in the frame and OOF petals to the left being a distraction. The techs look good with nice rich color, keep shooting and experimenting and see what you can find.
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    Hey Ted, nice idea, my suggestion would be to have it running on a diagonal, rather than straight across.

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    Hi Ted, yes I agree with Mike, placing the stamens diagonally in the frame would really enhance this composition.

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