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    Well, chalk up another dismal and cloudy day here in Seattle. Luckily, the harlquins invited me out to their rock for the first time. I waded out at low tide and on some precarious footing--but they stayed put and allowed me a very close view. Tough shooting in real low light--but fun just the same! :)
    40D 300/2.8 IS + 2X TC
    1/320s f/7.1 at 600.0mm iso640 Handheld (on slippery rocks! LOL!)
    Last edited by Bonnie Block; 04-24-2008 at 09:34 PM.

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    Hello Bonnie,

    I find the rocks a strong distraction. The horizon needs some works as well. There is a black line at the right lower corner which I'm not sure what that is.

    I think this is a nice habitat image, but suffers from some basic technicals.

    Keep them coming!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maxis Gamez View Post
    Hello Bonnie,

    I find the rocks a strong distraction. The horizon needs some works as well. There is a black line at the right lower corner which I'm not sure what that is.

    I think this is a nice habitat image, but suffers from some basic technicals.

    Keep them coming!
    Hi Maxis, thanks for your comments.
    I must have missed on the right side there, as I had already rotated this image a bit and had to add some canvas to the right.
    Any better?

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    Hi Bonnie,

    Good job fixing the black like. I still think the horizon needs to be fixed, use your grids in Photoshop. I'll try to post my version in few minutes.

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    [IMG]http://********.org/bpn/original.jpg[/IMG]

    This is my version with the horizon fixed. Sorry about your signature but I had no other choose. Hope you like it and see the difference.

    Thanks!

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    I actually think I over did it by two degrees. Getting late LOL... :)

    Hope you don't mind!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maxis Gamez View Post
    I actually think I over did it by two degrees. Getting late LOL... :)

    Hope you don't mind!
    Thanks Maxis! I do see. I should go more by the shadows than by the water lines. This image is a tough one for me.

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