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I like the pose here, and the amount of perch showing at is just right. Comp is OK too. There is some colour noise that was the result of your initial underexposure and subsequent correction in post. If mine I'd probably eliminate the greenery below from directly below the bill to the left edge.
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Dennis:
Good comments from Daniel. I like the pose, very dynamic. I think the net effect of your adjustments is that the bird looks a bit over processed, esp. along the neck. Might be able to back off slightly on the sharpening.
Cheers
Randy
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A nicely caught pose Dennis having lots of impact. I do, however, find the composition a little tight here.
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Magnificent pre-take off flight shot.Very nice wing position.Lovely composition.I like the re post.
Regards,
Satish.
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Dennis:
I think the pose is so good, that I would def. keep the image. Repost is an improvement, looks less manipulated to my eye.
Cheers
Randy
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Yes, the repost is much better!
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A vote for the repost, well done.
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Thank you all for your very helpful comments. It seems as though I am getting better at taking pictures, but I still have a bit to learn about post-processing.
I am looking forward to taking my new (used) 1D Mark IV out for a real spin...perhaps in SW Florida this winter. I'm thinking January or February.
Last edited by Dennis Zaebst; 11-10-2012 at 05:14 PM.