Hi Raymond,
I like your capture, I like the action here with the speared fish in his bill. The wing position is great, showing the details under the wing. His head is turned away from you but thats ok because the fish saves the day. My recommendation on this lovely image woud be to tone down or lighten ( soften ) the dark vertical lines in your background...:D
I really like the speared fish and the water droplets trailing off his feet. I also like the layered bg, but the vertical elements are distrating to me.