Rose
I took this photo at Longwood Gardens a few weeks ago.
Processed in Elements 10: Skew & crop; clone imperfections; levels; selective lighten and darken; Shadows/Highlights; selective desaturation; warming Photo Filter; texture by Kim Klassen; Omni lighting in center; Color Efex Pro: Polarization and Vignette Blur.
I'm bothered by the outer petals right and left--but not sure why.
Constructive critique requested! :-)
When I first looked at this, Anita, I tried to see why you might be bothered by the outer petals. I like them, but my vision of a rose tends to be of something that's soft and delicate. Finally, I realized that my attention was focused on that strong ring of yellow. When I desaturated the yellow some, the outer petals seemed better incorporated into the image, make it more harmonious. Reducing the saturation of the yellow really made the pinks stand out, so I backed off the saturation of the red channel a bit, too but a smaller amount.
To me, it also made the curve of the petals easier to appreciate.
Anita, I think Dennis hit the nail on the head
"It is only with the heart that one can see rightly" - The Little Prince
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Thank you so much, Dennis and Cheryl. You solved my problem. :-)
Dennis made some good changes but I've always liked bold and colorful...nice work Anita
I like Dennis' softness, too. I think perhaps, Anita, that is sort of what you wanted to accomplish, too or it wouldn't have bothered you. The pinks is yours is a bit neon....but then, living in a university town, I can see where the brighter colors would thrill some of our residents, so it's, again, all in the vision.
I appreciate the thoughtful comments. I toned it down as per Dennis' suggestion and was happier with the result. I do love bright colors, but can go overboard.
HI Anita...just want to give you a vote for the OP! Lovely work!
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