Results 1 to 9 of 9

Thread: Ruby Crowned Kinlet

  1. #1
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Location
    London
    Posts
    213
    Threads
    41
    Thank You Posts

    Default Ruby Crowned Kinlet

    Hi Guys I took this photo last week I did some background clean up where two branches poking into the scene.

    Let me no what you guys think.


    Canon 7D
    1/250s f/4.5 at 500.0mm iso800



    My other pictures can be found here
    http://www.pbase.com/coreyhayes/root


    Last edited by Peter Kes; 10-29-2012 at 06:23 AM.

  2. #2
    BPN Member dankearl's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2011
    Location
    Portland, Oregon
    Posts
    8,833
    Threads
    1,358
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    A very nice look at this little guy.
    well exposed, nice BG.
    I think moving it a bit higher if you can would look nice.
    Dan Kearl

  3. #3
    Lifetime Member Ákos Lumnitzer's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2012
    Location
    Sydney, Australia
    Posts
    1,561
    Threads
    71
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Did you do something with the end of the branch on which the bird is sitting? Looks a little odd as it just stops. Nice pose and good details!

  4. #4
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jun 2011
    Location
    Pune, Maharashtra, India
    Posts
    7,409
    Threads
    469
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Simple and very very sweet image of Kinlet. Love the pose,colors,details and beautiful background.

    Regards,
    Satish.

  5. #5
    Forum Participant John Cooper's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Australia - New South Wales
    Posts
    2,065
    Threads
    241
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    A beautiful capture Corey - such a sweet little bird - great composition, sharpness and superb BG - well done..!! If I could make any suggestions it would be to crop a little from the top to further strengthen the composition.

  6. #6
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    Long Island, New York
    Posts
    6,275
    Threads
    574
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Yes, the comp could be improved, but I think you did extremely well to get this little one in sharp focus and sitting still for a moment. I have not succeeded! BG is pretty as well.

  7. #7
    Super Moderator Daniel Cadieux's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Ottawa, Canada
    Posts
    26,315
    Threads
    3,979
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Good simple image design, very sharp, love the yellow wingbars. There is a bit too much negative space above IMO, but beautiful BG!! Nice body and head angles. Well done overall, just wish the perch extended beyond the bird's back and out of the frame....

  8. #8
    Super Moderator arash_hazeghi's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    San Francisco, California, United States
    Posts
    18,556
    Threads
    1,321
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    nice capture with good light and nice details, ditto comments above by Dan
    New! Sony Capture One Pro Guide 2022
    https://arihazeghiphotography.com/Gu.../Sony_C1P.html


    ------------------------------------------------
    Visit my blog
    http://www.arihazeghiphotography.com/blog

  9. #9
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Location
    London
    Posts
    213
    Threads
    41
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Thanks guys the branch the bird is sitting on was broken off so that why it just ends I removed it because I was not sure it looked good.

    Here I added it back and cropped away a bit of the top space.

    thanks for the comments.

    Last edited by Corey Hayes; 10-29-2012 at 09:35 PM.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics