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    Default Reddish Egret Portrait

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    Taken at Fort Desoto this past April
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    F 500mm
    F 8.0
    SS 1/2000
    ISO 800
    Taken at ~ 8:00am during a fun morning with Nicki Gwynne-Jones
    Vertical crop from horizontal.Not sure about this comp.
    Comments and critiques always appreciated and learned from with thanks,
    Gail


    Last edited by Peter Kes; 10-17-2012 at 12:30 PM.

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    Beautiful light on this handsome fellow, and a perfect turn of the head. The crop works for me, but I might also imagine just a little more room below and less on the top. You've got the eye pretty close to the ROT. There may be a hint of crunchiness on the neck feathers.

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    Hi Gail, good detail throughout, and I feel you have the sharpness spot on. Comp wise, I agree with Bill, a little off the top, and add a touch to the bottom, so we can see where neck feathers end.

    With these type of portraits, I try and shoot vertical in camera.

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    Very attractive bird and a pretty pastel BG.
    A bit more of a vertical crop if you have would look nice.
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    I rather like the crop as is myself, lovely portrait and detail, especially like the pastel soft two tone backdrop

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    I like the pose, HA and BG. I like Stuarts composition suggestion. Nice image Gail.

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    Nice details and exposure here, Gail. I'd like to see less room on top.
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    Gorgeous portrait.Very nice details,lights and background. I like the composition as it,however square composition also looks beautiful.(I tried).

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    Excellent sharp portrait Gail. I like the two toned BG and soft colours. Suggested comp would work nicely.

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    great portrait of the handsome reddish. sharp and clean. I just wish the sun was directly behind you
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    Nice as is but a vertical crop showing more intimate closeness of the head, and not showing part of the body that is not lit, might have been better, Gail.

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    Nice Reddish portrait Gail. I like the complimentary BG color and the shadowing created by the light direction. I'd consider a crop off the top and right of the frame.
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    Nice portrait of our resident Reddish Egret. They are one of my favorites to shoot. I like that you got the plumage slightly raisd from the body showing nice details.

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    Wonderful shot.
    I really like the shawdows in the feathers as it gives them some real good definition.
    Wonderful background, great pose, and excellent details.
    Very well done.

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