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I really like the angle here with the head turn at you. It is a little tight as you said and I can se it with a little more room but like as posted. If mine would maybe lighten the eye shadow just a bit.
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Nice one, especially under the circumstances you descibe :-)
I'd not only lighten the area around the eye's facial disk (left eye of owl) but also under the wings. Be wary of too much - it looks like some noise is lurking there.
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Very Nice. Great stare at the Pentax. Vivid blue sky sets the owl off nicely. Another vote to lighten the eye disc. Nice work.
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Gareth:
Nice job capturing this unexpected visitor. The repost helps considerably with the dark shadows, so I like it. Too tight from a framing standpoint for me.
In regards to noise, whenever you bring up the exposure in shadowed areas, you are at risk for aggravating noise. Even the D3s and D4, which have great noise performance, can show noise if the shadows are lightened significantly.
Cheers
Randy
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I like the repost. Well done!
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A little tight for my taste and the repost has a bit to much noise you could run some NR on a layer mask to clean it up.
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it's great that you got a close flyby, it's a handsome owl and you have a nice head turn, the main issue here was the harsh light and the shaded parts but owls fly very rarely on daylight. As presented it's a big in the frame and I would desaturate the sky so it doesn't distract from the subject.
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Hi Gareth, great eye contact, and well timed to capture the head turn. Your repost looks better, and agree, maybe a bit large in the frame. A subject I wish I had in my files, as I dont have a single one.
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Really nice pose that you captured. I will agree with Arash about the sky, I would desaturate it quite a bit.
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Hi Gareth I saw the shot soon after you posted it but I had to go out, my initial reaction was wow well caught. I had a couple of reservations: first too tight in the frame although I do agree it provides impact, and secondly I would desaturate the blue sky and if necessary adjust the brightness subsequently. Your repost looks good and I suspect the noise will be much less apparent if you reduce the crop size.
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Well shot. Really like how you've captured that stare. I agree with others' comments - it is a bit tight, so I'd crop less tightly if possible, and the sky is a bit bright. I have shot with that same combo (K5 + DA 300) quite a bit - and also agree with earlier comments - shadow areas under wings will produce noise when you boost them, regardless of camera. It's not an issue with that K5 sensor. Depending on the time of day, I'd switch between spot and matrix metering to see which give you best results for the bright whites. For the bright white birds I normally shoot (herons and egrets), for both Pentax and Nikon, I tend to get better preservation in bright whites when the sun is bright with spot metering, and a -0.3 or -0.7 exposure comp.
Pete
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