I would agree, take more off the bottom. possibly as much as up to the middle of the concentric circle on the bottom. You nailed two ideal wing positions. Good job on this.
Two excellent images of the snowy, I like each one very much. Excellent wing positions, love the splash of water, and the techs are right on. But.... just to be the naysayer in the group :), I would rather see them as individual images then in the sequence. To me it looks like one snowy is chasing another (which would be a really cool thing to capture :) ), but I wouldn't have got the sense that it is a sequence of the same bird without you saying so. Did a great job on putting them together to create one image, and I think all it would take to turn it into a sequence for me is just more versions of the snowy added into the scene.
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I'm coming late to this discussion so I'm not sure whether this photo has been recropped in accordance with the advice above or whether it still is as posted. I really like the sequence but would want to make sure that any viewer (as at a show) was aware that it was a composite. If the photo is as originally posted, then I (like Jason) will be a naysayer. Unlike others, I like the space at the bottom. I think it gives perspective and adds to the dynamic feel. A closer crop at the bottom would put the sequence in the middle of the frame and I think it would be less effective as a result. I should say that I often like more space at the bottom of the photo than other photographers do however ( my idiosyncratic view). I also like the reflected color. The effect of this would be reduced with a bottom crop.