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I like the composition and the crazy eye.
Colors seem a bit over-saturated and too yellow.
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Hi Gen, I might be tempted to move the crop a little to the RHS to reduce some of the dead space on the LHS, cut cropping is personal, however I do agree on the eye.
The image does look very contrasty, and there is some sharpening halos on the horns. It also lacks the subtle detail & clarity within the subject, especially the horns and agree with Robert about the saturation. I would go back to the RAW and firstly adjust the Colour temp, then any Black or Contrast you may have added, is this a large crop or FF? Looking at the tech I think you should be able to get a lot more from within the image.
TFS
Steve
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I think Morkel's work has "fine tuned" it very well.
Tom
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Hi Gen,
like the pose of the ram and this biiiig horns.
Light was really on your side and the colors are really nice.
Morkel pushed in the right direction.
But composition is not working for me, i mean both.
Would like to see more room on RHS.
TFS Andreas
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I've re worked this guy a few times, thanks to your input and each time I am happier with the results. I don't have much more room on the rhs but I am pleased with the square composition. I believe the raw is sharp and it is just my pp that needs more work. Will continue to do so. Thanks for all the inpunt
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