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Hi Morkel,
usually your images have an embedded profile, this one not !
Cheers Andreas
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Hi Morkel,
i think this image is not as good working as your others.
The major issue for me is the comp, it is too tight and too centered for my taste.I do not know the situation, so maybe there was no other option.I would have liked to see a bit more room to LHS and top.
To smaller things are the sharpness and the tonal contrast on the rhino itself, where i have gone too far with the bear , i think you can go a bit further here.And if you make use , of your NIK tonal contrast on the rhino, you can squeeze out more tonal variation.Just my thoughts.
The good things are the scene (feeding rhino) and the beautiful light you captured here.The surrounding looks processed very nicely, likewise the colors.
And always good to see a blackie with full horns.!!!
TFS Andreas
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Looks better to me !!
Ps: second rhino behind the first one ? Look between the legs and the belly !
Cheers Andreas
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Originally Posted by
Andreas Liedmann
Looks better to me !!
Ps: second rhino behind the first one ? Look between the legs and the belly !
Cheers Andreas
Thanks.
There was a calf at this scene but he was out-of-frame here. I think it's a small termite mound with some light/shadow playing tricks there...
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Hi Morkel - nice to see a black rhino. Repost takes it up a notch.
TFS,
Rachel
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Repost takes it up a notch.
Plus one here. 
Everything has been said already and addressed. You could add a fraction more above, with little effort to help the horn, and/or lose a little off the RHS, personal choice.
TFS
Steve
Post Production: It’s ALL about what you do with the tools and not, which brand of tool you use.

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Thank you Rachel and Steve...