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Miguel,
Pretty good work done on clipped wing.I like nice wing pose and open beak.
Love the details in whites,tail feathers,lights,BG and panorama-crop composition.
Regards,
Satish.
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Nice work,Miguel.The spread out wings and the Terns looking directly towards you is what I like in this shot.The crop works well here.TFS
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Hi Miguel,
love the open beak and the spread wings very. Looks great to me. Wonder how it would look if the BG is a bit more soften!
Ciao
Anette
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Hi Miguel, I like you pano crop - suits in the inflight pose, and well timed to get the open beak too. Whites look good, and good job on the repair.
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Great dynamic pose, Miguel, and I like the sense of the sea behind him. Good job on the wing repair. I might give a tad more room beyond the other wing as that tip looks cramped. If you can easily add canvas/content-aware fill.
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Great pano shot of this Tern. Nice job on the wing repair.
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Thanks for the feedback guys!
Anette - not clear what you mean by a a "BG that is a bit more soften". As in blur it a bit more or try to make it more uniform? Or lighter?
Melissa - I agree! I will add a bit more room to the other side as well.
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Nice detail in the white wings, and I like the pano. Good work on the wingtip repair.
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Excellent facial expression captured! The flight pose and light quality are A+.
There are some smudging PS marks still visible at the ends of the repaired wing tip,
but I have to pixel peep to see them
More room on the sides, particularly the
left side, is a great suggestion.
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Miguel lovely image, really enjoy landing pose. I would have prefered slightly softer light, maybe try decrease the exposure slightly. I also agree with above comments on adding extra space. Open beak adds so nicely well done.
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Shawn, I could see the evidence of a repaired wing as soon as I was done, but wasn't very good at fixing it.
Vivaldo, I'll try the decrease in exposure to see what it looks like.
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I like the open beak, wing position, composition and BG. Well done Miguel!
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Nice pose and repair. The tail looks a tad sharper than the head which is still pretty sharp. The WHITEs on the top of the head could use a bit more detail.
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very dramatic pose with the incoming angle, the open bill and the tail spread. beautiful Florida BG. Head a bit soft but does not hurt the image much. Well done.