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Nice BG, light, and placement. Decent wing position. Exposure is perfect. I would make your signature smaller in the future.
Looking forward to more!
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Lifetime Member
Hi Neil, good flying pose with the raised wings, sharp, and I do like the trailing droplets. The placement in the frame works too.
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Super Moderator
excellent light, pose and details and the water drops add to the story!
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Very nice wing position. Would love to see a bit more sharpening on the head, otherwise it looks great!
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Super Moderator
This looks alot better than I thought from the thumbnail. Colours, sharpeness, drops flying and water BG. I would look at lightening the wing's shadow on the back a bit more as my eye wanders there more than it should. Comp looks OK, but I'd try a version with the subject not so tucked in to the top and right.
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Daniel / Miguel: Appreciate the feedback. I will try and make those tweaks. Thanks !