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    Took this photo at Ding Darling D-70s Sigma 500 4.5 1/500 F-8
    in keeping with the HAP discussion, would this be considered a proper head angle?
    Comments welcome, eager to learn:)

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    I like the pose and pretty bg I just wish you had some Fill Flash on the subject.

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    Hi Ray,
    To my untrained eye this image appears to lack a little "pop". I think with the soft, similar shades of color it's important to have that extra sharpness/detail/contrast to prevent evrything from "blending" together. I'm sure one of are more experienced moderators could better explain. I do like the pastel colors of this one though. They go quite well together.
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    Like the eye contact, wish for a slightly lower angle though. Image looks a tad dark and has low contrast - fill flash would have helped to lighten the shadows. Imported this PS, tried to eliminate a greenish cast, enhanced contrast and lightened the image:

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    For me the head angle is fine if not ideal. Though the image looks a bit soft and flat, Dieter's re-post, for me is a bit over-done (but thakns Dieter for the effort).
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    Raymond hope you don't mind my playing. A nice pose and I like the bg color a lot. I ran the image through Neat Image and then sharpened it and added some flash to lighten it some. It's always a treat to get these beauties looking at you. Nice.

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    Way to go Paul! Great re-post.
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    Thanks Artie,
    I just found out that we share the same birth day, Flag Day only you have 10 years on me.
    Ray
    P.S. I'll have to remember to wish you a Happy Birthday on our special day

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    Thanks Paul, I like what you have done with my photo

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    Thank you Dieter, for your comments

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    Raymond Packard
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    Thank for looking & sharing your thoughts Steve

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