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Hi Rachel.
Nice image, with a beautiful sky. The mountains are interesting, and I like what appear to be vehicle tracks on the left side about 1/3 up from the bottom.
If it were mine, I'd investigate cropping out more of the rough grasses at the bottom and a bit off the top, to see what more of a pano image would look like.
Norm
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Thanks Norm and Mark. It's a good alternative comp though I somewhat like the texture of the rough grasses (probably because I was there and walked through them). Those are in fact vehicle tracks on each side of the image.
Thanks again,
Rachel
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Hi Rachel
Like you I love the soft colours in this, but I do agree with the guys above regarding the crop as well and like what Mark has done but would have trimmed a little more sky (to just above the big cloud on the left) to give it more of a pano aspect ratio. I appreciate your reason for leaving the foreground and probably would do the same..
Don
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Rachel,
I am going the other way here with regards to the crop comments and my comments to your previous images and say I find the FG interesting but not distracting.
I did a browser crop and found that just a small amount off the bottom helps to accentuate the mountains more - a good thing IMO.
Nice work.
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Thanks Don and Robert very much
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Hi Rachel,
great image and wonderful colors. I like it the way it is. Especially the vehicle tracks coming in.
Wonderful place 
Ciao
Anette
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I like both crops - nice soft hues!
Did you consider using the road as a central leading line? It's hidden on the LHS now and I feel it could've been more prominent
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Morkel - thanks. I did not consider it as a central line but rather placed it on both sides. That's also the track coming in from the right. It goes down a bit and then curves around and approaches camp on the left.
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Brilliant colours an dunes. Like the crop suggestion of Robert :) TFS
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