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    This adult Killdeer was photographed from my car yesterday with my rig resting on a folded up sweatshirt on the lowered driver’s side window; oh how I wish that I had brought my BLUBB to NY! With the Canon 800mm f/5.L IS lens, the 1.4X III TC, and the discontinued Canon EOS-1D Mark IV. ISO 400. Evaluative metering -1/3 stop: 1/250 sec. at f/11 in Manual mode. Central sensor (by necessity) AI Servo/Rear Focus AF on the closest bird’s face and recompose. Click here if you missed the Rear Focus Tutorial. Bill and background clean-up.

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    Beautifully clean post-storm light on this Killdeer, with a great pose. Sunlit grasses on the right just mildly distracting. Very useful lesson in clean-up. Thanks for sharing.

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    Nice portrait of the Killdeer with lovely light, colors and angle but feels cramped.
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    Really nice light on this killdeer. Could be a bit looser in the frame. Good lessons in the blog. What a nice puddle. I never leave home without my blubb.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Marina Scarr View Post
    Nice portrait of the Killdeer with lovely light, colors and angle but feels cramped.
    Agree, but I think that it just gets under the wire with respect to my "no longer than 75% of either dimension" guideline :).
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    great detail and color on the killdeer. Wonder what a bit of desaturation on the grass would do to the overall image.

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    The light is beautiful as is the HA and pose.
    I wish you had moved a bit to the right to get rid of some of the grasses on the right side and that may have allowed to get the head and beak against a cleaner BG.I find the near vertical grass that intersects with the beak distracting and would clone it out.
    A lovely shot,
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    Excellent. I like the environment, you should have said it was taken at the local wetlands!
    The light and pose are very nice.
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    not often that we can suggest improvement on your photographs, so could not resist :)
    it would have looked a lot better if the direction of the head and tail would have been reversed,
    i.e. the bird looking in the direction of the tail with a similar pose.
    Removing the all the grass on the right or the vertical blade of grass near the beak would also improve this one a lot
    Last edited by Manjeet & Yograj Jadeja; 08-28-2012 at 11:41 PM.

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    Magnificent image of Killdeer in habitat.
    Love the pose,colors.details and way bird pops on BG. Green curved BG and FG gives nice 3D effect to image.

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    Hey Athur, Great image. The processing on the bird is great, I do agree with Gail's comment on the vertical grass. I am curious to ask, weren't you tempted to remove the 1.4x and shoot this at f/5.6? Seems like it could have add space to image and blur to the bright and busy background on the top right.

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    I really like the colors and environment you captured. Great find and execution from the car as well. I too would like just a little bit more room mostly at the tail end

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    Quote Originally Posted by Martin Lord View Post
    Hey Athur, Great image. The processing on the bird is great, I do agree with Gail's comment on the vertical grass. I am curious to ask, weren't you tempted to remove the 1.4x and shoot this at f/5.6? Seems like it could have add space to image and blur to the bright and busy background on the top right. Best, /martin
    Hi Martin, Removing the TC would have resulted in the bird being 1/2 the size in the frame as the area that the bird covers is a function of the square of the focal length, in this case that would have been 8 squared = 64 as compared to 11.2 squared or 125.44. And there was simply not time to move the car as the birds were moving about :).
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    Thanks Authur. Always interested to see how you work.

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