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I love this! The monochromatic effect and super low angle are really awesome! Don't see the need for all the space at the bottom though.
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Grace, this is amazingly beautiful image...Excellent low angle, exposure, details, color and yes that water around beak surely makes it different. Great work.
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Nice goal and nice Sanderling. I like him just the way he is, including enough space below for the vague reflection.
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very nice,nice light,sharp with good detail,like the water against the birds bill,good low angle.well done.
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Absolutely superb image.Love the nice feathers of wings, details in whites and the water around the beak.
Agree with Ofer about crop at bottom.
Regards,
Satish.
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Grace,
You have certainly succeeded in your goal here, the water around the beak makes this a very different image indeed
I agree with others that the space at the bottom is perhaps a little excessive
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The silver tones are lovely and the water cone around the beak is very neat.
Great low POV and IQ.
I like the comp as is but would also like it with a bit off the bottom,
Gail
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Grace:
Your mission was accomplished! Excellent techs, with that little extra that pushes it to a higher level. Good shooting angle too.
For my taste, I would crop up about 1/3 of the free space below the bird, but it is certainly effective as posted.
I am always thrilled when reviewing images after a shoot to see that little special detail that I might not have even seen when shooting.
Cheers
Randy
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Thanks to all who have looked and commented. To address the space at the bottom...(Ofer, I typed you a response last pm, but must have not hit Enter)....I totally agree that there are other options for composition here. I was enjoying the diffuse reflection and as the bird was foraging in the away edge of a tidal puddle and that's what caught my attention. I do agree that it is a bit much now that I look at it a day away from the creation of it.
Thanks again.
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Always nice to see something a bit different, as this is. Love the water ring. And a fine Sanderling shot in all other respects including the soft fg/bg. Space beneath already noted and answered.
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What a lovely capture, Grace, and I love to learn that you have set goals. It makes such a difference at the end of the shooting season. Love the color scheme here, the details and the water by the beak. Agree on some off the bottom b/c I feel it would better showcase the water around the beak.
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Yes to less space below...but all else is perfect. Stunning feeding behaviour image!!
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Hi Grace, I call this perfect timing, as the water must have been there for a millisecond. Super low angle, and I really like the soft light and softer colours. Space below mentioned.
Congrats on getting your dream shot.
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great shot, the highlight here is the water film at the base of the beak which adds to the dynamic element. techs are great I would also subtract space from the bottom this can be done by changing the AR from 4:3 to 3:2
great frame
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Another beautiful image Grace. The beak pushing the water and the wonderful detail is what I think pushes this over the top. I'm torn about the crop, I agree that it is a lot of space at the bottom but I love how the diagonal line of the birds reflection pulls you into the image and that would be lost with a tighter crop.
Just my thoughts
Gen
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Grace, sweet, sweet image! I like it as presented. The soft color tones add so nicely to the great pose with the water over the bill.
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Nicely done on all counts. My only suggestion would be to lose the rather large dark blob top center with some 40% clone stamp tool work.
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ps: this is a worn adult well molted into winter (basic) plumage.
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Excellent shot. Love the low angle, excellent pose especially the way the water is formed around it bill. Great details and I really like it as is.
Well done.
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Thanks again to everyone for your helpful comments...Artie, I will fix the blob. You can see a few of the breeding plumage feathers remaining, one of the subtle details that caught my eye about this bird. Isn't this fresh winter plumage lovely? So muted and fine.
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First of all, Grace, your images have never been boring. They are always technically and artistically superb. I love the ring of water, the soft light, and I actually like the comp as is.
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Great pose you got here at an equally great angle. I might consider a slight CCW rotation. I love the water tension around the head of the bird you froze in time. That alone makes it for me.